Dojang's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Voimavaellus]

nice

really nice concept. i hope you find the time to sink a little more time into it and make it a little cleaner and more finished.

[Dance of the Shoggoths]

this is your brain

if you're going for a psychadelic effect, you might want to look into a little more depth and some standardised colour patterns- i know it seems unintuitive, but you'll be able to create better contrasts with something sane to compare to all the madness.

keep at it.

Salamandrin responds:

Thanks for the input.

[Dreamed Person]

some good things here

you can draw, you can animate- you've got all the skills you need to make something really beautiful- but this peice feels jolty in places because of the way you've cut corners, jumping from shot to shot.
it might be worthwhile making a shorter animation, and spending more time making it flow smoothely.

all in all, a very cute little film.

i look foward to seeing more animations from you!

[BONK!]

hmmm

It's solid animation, but i really feel like you've got the skills to be working on something other than video game parody. kinda hurts to watch.
I look foward to future animations!

[Soda]

keep practicing.

there's some nice scene progression here, but your plot is so bland!
as for your animation, dabble longer and harder- and dabble in some figure drawing too!

[PP - Sandcastles]

meaning? life lessons? on newgrounds?

this is a really nice change from the usual fare here- video games and parodies, and it's an interesting and important message. empathy and sympathy are in short supply.

as an atheist, the amassment of personal wealth makes sense- when you're done, you're done- and you want to enjoy what you've got while you've got it. imagine that the kids are all cancer patients with only a day to live- would you ask them to give up their castles?

[Rushed3]

guess what guys

24 hrs wasted. a lot of you have some really good choreography skills, and when you realise that stick figures can't convey any of the emotional content- or even the spatial physics that real animation does, i'll tread hot coals to come see your work- right now though, i can hardly stomach it. just hurts to watch.

do some figure drawing- have a play with perspective in space- you'll be surprised at what you're capable of.

also, why is the dialogue in stick animations always so terrible?