Dojang's Reviews

[Voimavaellus]

nice

really nice concept. i hope you find the time to sink a little more time into it and make it a little cleaner and more finished.

[Dance of the Shoggoths]

this is your brain

if you're going for a psychadelic effect, you might want to look into a little more depth and some standardised colour patterns- i know it seems unintuitive, but you'll be able to create better contrasts with something sane to compare to all the madness.

keep at it.

Salamandrin responds:

Thanks for the input.

[Dreamed Person]

some good things here

you can draw, you can animate- you've got all the skills you need to make something really beautiful- but this peice feels jolty in places because of the way you've cut corners, jumping from shot to shot.
it might be worthwhile making a shorter animation, and spending more time making it flow smoothely.

all in all, a very cute little film.

i look foward to seeing more animations from you!

[Massacre Street]

solid solid little game.

not what you might call adventerous design, but really solid work. animation, code, all seems to work well. good variation amongst zombies whilst maintaining the same feel and colour pallette is a rare thing!

thanks for posting this!

[The Outsider]

Fitting Tribute

Very well put together. My only critiscism is that the last scenes- intended in the original story to be shockingly well lit and dramatic after years underground- are somehow darker than the earlier scenes in the supposedly pitch black tower. Have confidence in your painting skills and create a horrifying monster, instead of just implying one in darkness.

also, text stayed on the screen frustratingly long- but all in all a great little experience, true to the original.